Sunday, August 23, 2009

Plot Assignment

Exposition: When I was young I always thought to myself how great it would be to ride a bicycle! I could go anywhere I wanted on only just two wheels, and quickly too! Therefore I begged my mom for a bicycle, and you would never know how happy I was when I got it. However, my happiness quickly turned into disappointment and I was discouraged.

Rising Action: I realized that I couldnt just ride a bike on two wheels, I had to be "trained" according to my older brother. I had to ride on four wheels, and I tell you, it was seriusly boring! It was so slow, it just LOOKEd so....amateur. Therefore, I literally forced my brother to teach me how to ride a TWO wheeled bike. My brother taught me everyday, he help onto the back of my bike, and he yelled "PEDAL!". It didnt seemed any use, because "pedaling" wasnt that easy as it seemed. My bike always wobbled and eventually I would fall down, and yes it HURTS!!!!!!

Climax: Day after day, I practiced with my brother, obviously I got lots of bruises. One day, it was the same old drill, my brother held on to me, and I pedaled, but this time something different happened. I felt myself start off a little more wobbly then before, but as I pedaled more and more I felt the wind whip harder on my face. Then I heard someone yelling, my brother! He was yelling YES! Then I looked down, I was riding a bike on two wheels!!! You will never know how happy I was.

Falling Action: I pedaled all over the neighborhood and I went FASSTTT. I yelled at my mom until she looked out our window. I pedaled around in circles so that she could see! I was very proud and happy that day. All the hard work did pay off, I could finally ride a 2 wheel bike!

Resolution: I will always remember day I learne to rided a 2 wheeled bike. Through all those days, falling down, getting discouraged, I had finally made it! The next day, I bragged even more, I had succeeded!

Conflict: I got hurt a lot and it took a long time to finally learn to ride the bike.

1 comment:

  1. I could picture you as a little Nemo fighting to ride a 2 wheel bike. Nice job. I could see that you have an understanding of plot and conflict.

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